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Admin Sun Mar 15, 2009 12:54 pm
Noelle looks about in her early twenties she is promised to Elias, the leader of the clan. Elias has been watching her years and everyone knew she "belonged" to him. Noelle doesn't love Elias and she sees marrying him as something she has to do, NOT something she desires to do. She is bitter and annoyed that she was ever changed in the first place, she doesn't enjoy feeding. However Elias wants her for her beauty and enjoys her fiestyness.
If you want if you're starting when James and Dani meet you can start for Noelle with Elias watching her, deciding he wants her to be his.
Elias is handsome & powerful but not very loving or reasonable. Noelle will be kidnapped by Bryan (similar to in the first one) while weak from lack of feeding. As much as she didn't enjoy her life in the clan she definitely does not want to be a captive or part of Bryan's plan. Bryan wants Elias to step down, he thinks it will be for the good of his fellow werewolves. The pair will argue and fight but ultimately they love each other. Bryan is 100 years old, he thinks he knows much more than Noelle in the beginning but he soon realizes that just because she has submitted to Elias doesn't mean she can't take care of herself etc.
Hmm what else do you need to know about Noelle, she was bitten on her 20th birthday by Elias. He intended to kill her but saw her beauty and decided to change her instead. It was ten years ago, he gave her some time to learn how things work in the clan before expressing his intentions. She feels trapped.
Eventually Elias will get her back but he will not trust her, he'll think she doesn't seem happy enough to return so he'll taste her blood and see her memories ( kind of like in Underworld). He'll see her fighting with Bryan but then kissing/making love, talking, etc. He'll lock her away while deciding what to do with her, clearly he is furious. But in the end Noelle and Bryan will get to be together.
I think that's enough for now..feel free to change anything or whatever to make it work better.
If you want if you're starting when James and Dani meet you can start for Noelle with Elias watching her, deciding he wants her to be his.
Elias is handsome & powerful but not very loving or reasonable. Noelle will be kidnapped by Bryan (similar to in the first one) while weak from lack of feeding. As much as she didn't enjoy her life in the clan she definitely does not want to be a captive or part of Bryan's plan. Bryan wants Elias to step down, he thinks it will be for the good of his fellow werewolves. The pair will argue and fight but ultimately they love each other. Bryan is 100 years old, he thinks he knows much more than Noelle in the beginning but he soon realizes that just because she has submitted to Elias doesn't mean she can't take care of herself etc.
Hmm what else do you need to know about Noelle, she was bitten on her 20th birthday by Elias. He intended to kill her but saw her beauty and decided to change her instead. It was ten years ago, he gave her some time to learn how things work in the clan before expressing his intentions. She feels trapped.
Eventually Elias will get her back but he will not trust her, he'll think she doesn't seem happy enough to return so he'll taste her blood and see her memories ( kind of like in Underworld). He'll see her fighting with Bryan but then kissing/making love, talking, etc. He'll lock her away while deciding what to do with her, clearly he is furious. But in the end Noelle and Bryan will get to be together.
I think that's enough for now..feel free to change anything or whatever to make it work better.
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